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Sarrah Vorkah'en

Post by TitanSeraph on Mon 18 Nov 2013, 1:56 pm



With naked ref of Sarrah:
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Re: Sarrah Vorkah'en

Post by TitanSeraph on Mon 18 Nov 2013, 2:01 pm

As usual, comments, criticism and all the fritata are nice < : D
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Re: Sarrah Vorkah'en

Post by Bloodtrailkiller on Mon 18 Nov 2013, 8:18 pm

As per usual; the nude pic is unavailable to people who don't have a FA account logged in, I think. 
Simply use the file-hosting in the reply section if needs be. Not the best quality, but it's something for me to criticize.
Basically; same issues I've had with your general "style", there's a lack of Life and Age to your creatures.
There's no weathering or personality to the character and it somehow always reminds me of Math.
Outside of that, the same old applauding; good overall anatomy, I suppose, though the eyes seem abit flat. 
I'm only giving criticism because you seem to have a fairly healthy base of complimenters...
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Re: Sarrah Vorkah'en

Post by TitanSeraph on Tue 19 Nov 2013, 9:20 am

The Heresy Marine wrote:As per usual; the nude pic is unavailable to people who don't have a FA account logged in, I think. 
Simply use the file-hosting in the reply section if needs be. Not the best quality, but it's something for me to criticize.
Basically; same issues I've had with your general "style", there's a lack of Life and Age to your creatures.
There's no weathering or personality to the character and it somehow always reminds me of Math.
Outside of that, the same old applauding; good overall anatomy, I suppose, though the eyes seem abit flat. 
I'm only giving criticism because you seem to have a fairly healthy base of complimenters...
> Dem feels
> You're right, I have a puush account for a reason. I just didn't get into the habbit of this yes.
> Well, it is a referencial frontal pic
> I'll be honest: Eyes aren't easy
> Dem feels

Well, here she is with the nakie on the side. Some ideas on how to give more life would be welcome. :B

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Re: Sarrah Vorkah'en

Post by Acceleradiant on Tue 19 Nov 2013, 5:44 pm

Try shading the eyes a bit. That might be why they seem flat.
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Re: Sarrah Vorkah'en

Post by TitanSeraph on Wed 20 Nov 2013, 7:36 pm

Acceleradiant wrote:Try shading the eyes a bit. That might be why they seem flat.
And thus, the shortest and simplest thing made me do this:
UPDATED:
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